Mabelma's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Baby Yoshi]

Nice!!! What's the collab? Where can we find it?

Seanatar responds:

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/698654

[Erotica of a Fashionista]

This is truly amazing work! it seems like it's half cut-out and half full on indian ink on white paper. Love it, keep up the amazing work!

serenekitchen responds:

thanks! if you are keen, here are some close up shots:
http://serenekitchendiary.tumblr.com/post/118846828812/erotica-of-a-fashionista-detail-and-progress

[Fortunation]

Simple and fun! I like it, my only suggestion would be to tone the saturation on the red; down a bit. It currently competes with the colors on the actual head.

Ryoma-Hechizen responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I kind of Agree, I usually don't go for that spectrum, so didn't know the impact it would have on the eye.

[Teto Kasane]

The proportions and the anatomy are all over the place, but fuck do I love that color palette. Great work on that and best of luck at the con! Amazing work on the eyes, if the rest of the body had that level of detail and time spent on, I think this image would benefit greatly.

MikomiKisomi responds:

Thank you very much! I'll take that into consideration- I definitely do spend a fair amount of time on the eyes, so I'll try to figure out a way to spend that much time on everything else as well. :)

[Wendy needs Stowies]

I like this a lot, the ambiance is great and the characters display well... character. My only problem with be the fire, it seems to be out of perspective and just pasted there, it seems like it has a whole different light source altogether. Remember that objects that emit a light are also subject to the shadows the light will give them.

Kerzid responds:

Yeah, still working on that whole 'hey this is the part where the light comes from'.

Thank you for the feedback.

[Wendy's Poignance]

Not sure what the theme is or who Wendy is but I like the chracter. The face has a lot of emotion other than that, it's a pretty simple picture. Liked what you did witht he texture of the paper. Maybe next time try something a little riskier compositionally but good job nonetheless.

Kerzid responds:

Thank you. With the painting software I use, There's not much I can do really.

[Calfinn and Hobbes]

Sooo awesome! You fucking it killed it brother.

Soupcat responds:

Am I going to jail now?

[There is no god.]

Love your comic, love your art, love your jokes, great to see you all on newgrounds!

ToonHole responds:

Thanks Mabelma! We're here to stay! YOU CAN"T GET RID OF USSSS

[OUCH!]

Very interesting piece, I love the use of bright colors to contrast with the background and the two hyenas show great emotion. The only thing that I'm not really liking about the image is how rigid the female looks compared to the others, apart from that really nice work.

JWBalsley responds:

Hey thanks for the words, yeah she's a bit rigid, I was going for an angular spiky feel, but she will develop further once I start getting her into some stories. Meanwhile I'm trying to give the new hyenas kind of a doughy clumsy look. Cheers!

[Best Friends]

Nice.

Amazing as always Mercury, keep up the great work.

MercuryBD responds:

Thanks M :) ...