Mabelma's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Smash Bros. Brawl Medley]

I freaking love this so much!!!! Thank you for making it!!!!

[Super Smash Bros 4 Main Theme]

Niceeee, love this song!

[Smash Bros Brawl Theme-8bit]

I love this.

[Super Smash Bros. Melee - Menu Theme (Zen.R.G Dance Remix)]

This is good 🙌

[Super Smash Bros Ultimate - Theme Blue2 Remix]

Good work.

[Super Smash Bros. Ultimate (Hip Hop Instrumental)]

Niceeeee

[Talk]

Uffff this is fireeee!!!

[El Mabster de la Lyrica]

Duroh!

[Nixies - Lore]

Really cool story.

Wondermeow responds:

Thank you, glad you enjoy it

[Gmon Outta This]

For a freestyle it's pretty nice. I suggest you stay clear of the egotistical rapping, try and tell a story with your rhymes rather than just saying, "I'm great, I'm great, I'm great" It makes for better songs in my opinion. Apart from that there's not much else to say, seeing as it's only a freestyle I can't actually judge your rhyming but keep going mate, and keep posting for sure, don't stop.

Lamazar1 responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate this review. I'm glad you didn't vote down on me too much and understood that I was just saying the first things that came to my mind that kind of sounded similar lol. I'll take your advice when I actually sit down to write a song and maybe soon will start even making my own beats to flow with. If you have any more suggestions PM me and we'll talk some time.